Monday, May 24, 2010

Green class--Terminology (of poetry)



You've been given a poetry term, so here's your assignment.

Define your term. You may copy and paste the definition from the web site that's on the term sheet.

Give at least three examples of your term from either poetry, song, or some famous speech, clearly explaining each of your examples. Do NOT use examples from the poetry web site where you can find the terms.

You might be asking, "If we're trying to study poetry in a less conventional way, then why are we learning all of these terms?"

Well, if you're going to "water ski across the surface of a poem," then I certainly want you to understand what the surface of the water is like. Things like metaphors, similes, and allusions don't swim in deep waters. You can easily discover them from a quick thrill ride across the surface of a poem.

Now the photo? It's from an album cover of an 80s girls' band called The Go-Go"s. The title song was also the name of the album, Vacation. Watch the video for some very corny water skiing at this link at 1:15.

Much cornier than my in-class water skiing.

Blue Class---Terminology (of poetry)


You've been given a poetry term, so here's your assignment.

Define your term. You may copy and paste the definition from the web site that's on the term sheet.

Give at least three examples of your term from either poetry, song, or some famous speech, clearly explaining each of your examples. Do NOT use examples from the poetry web site where you can find the terms.

You might be asking, "If we're trying to study poetry in a less conventional way, then why are we learning all of these terms?"

Well, if you're going to "water ski across the surface of a poem," then I certainly want you to understand what the surface of the water is like. Things like metaphors, similes, and allusions don't swim in deep waters. You can easily discover them from a quick thrill ride across the surface of a poem.

Now the photo? It's from an album cover of an 80s girls' band called The Go-Go"s. The title song was also the name of the album, Vacation. Watch the video for some very corny water skiing at this link at 1:15.

Much cornier than my in-class water skiing.

Saturday, May 22, 2010

Senior Exam Review

Senior Exam Review is available on Studywiz.

Thursday, May 20, 2010

Catch a Wave in Heaven

Our friend, your teacher and coach, Mr. Joe O'Neill, passed away May 20, 2009. I remember him every day.

The accompanying photo pictures Mr. O'Neill with his grandson Brendan looking out into the Pacific Ocean. Joe always dreamed of going to California--he loved the Beach Boys and the surf--and he finally made it out to Cali the summer before he passed away. I only regret that I wasn't with him on the trip to witness first hand his excitement. But boy, did he talk about that trip when he came back! And listening to him was maybe just as much fun as being there.


Mr. O'Neill was one of those rare persons who made you feel good just by talking to him. Irish through and through, he loved to converse (yes, he kissed the Blarney Stone on a trip to Ireland), but what he had to say was never nonsense. In fact, he was a master of clear talking and thinking, and he mocked (though gently) those who "bloviated" pretentiously.

He loved to tell stories, and I was on the receiving end many times, so when I was asked to speak at his funeral, I repeated, with honor, some of his wonderful often-told tales.

Remembering him every day makes me, at least, think, that I'm becoming a better person.

But as good as I might ever become, I will always be at least a transcontinental flight away from being the kind of man that he was.







Sunday, May 16, 2010

Sophomore Extra Credit #1 "Your Song"

Post before Thursday, May 20, to receive 4 points.

These days, when a major league baseball player walks to the plate as his name is announced, the public address system blares a song that either the player or someone in the public relations office has specially selected. It's called his "entrance" or "introduction" song.

You don't have to know baseball to understand that macho guys might choose macho songs like "Bad to the Bone" or "Wild Thing" as their personal theme music.

Now I don't suppose that you have a POEM that you personally respond or relate to, do you? If not, then how about a song?

Let me know what poem or song you'd like to have read or played as your name is announced to thousands of fans at the ballpark.

And of course, explain why.

You might mention the lyrics. You might mention the pounding of the drums or the blaring horns. You might mention some memory that you have of the song that you relate to.

Do so in a minimum of 200 words or 25 blogs lines.

The point is that we should try to relate personally to poetry or music and not worry too much about what the author REALLY meant or intended. I bet these baseball players don't analyze their "introduction songs" too much.

I've selected the song "Keep the Car Running" (by Arcade Fire) to be played when I make it to the big leagues. I think it's a cool title to a song, and it sounds like something someone would say who wants to be sure there's always a way out of trouble. Not that I'm a troublemaker or anything. It's got a pulsating rhythm, vocals that cross Bruce Springsteen with David Byrne (Talking Heads), and some well placed chants that give it the feel of an anthem. It especially sounds good late at night in your car when you're cruising (the speed limit, naturally) on I-95. One thing's for sure--you'll never fall asleep listening to this song.

Thursday, May 13, 2010

Seniors--More Dead Poets extra credit #2















Go to Studywiz and then open the file that says Dead Poets poetry. You'll find some poetry and prose that's read in whole or in part in the Dead Poets Society, along with a poem that I wrote for the Class of 2005.

In keeping with the teaching of Mr. Keating, I don't want you to rate these poems or analyze them. Please do NOT beat "them with a hose to find out what they really mean."

Instead, respond personally to any one of these poems.

200 words or 25 blog lines.

Due before class on Wednesday, May 19.

Seniors--Beyond the Classroom extra credit #1


Post before class on Monday, May 17, for extra credit.

200 words or 25 blog line minimum.

In the movie, Dead Poets Society, the inspirational English teacher, Mr. John Keating, used poetry to open up a whole new world of life lessons for his young charges. Instead of learning how to rate poetry like it was a song on American Bandstand (an old teen dance show during which teens rated new "records"), he encouraged his students to savor the spoken word, to think for themselves, and to "seize the day."Poetry, he said, celebrates the reasons we stay alive--for passion, love, beauty, and romance. Most of his students "got the message," though some resisted (that's only natural, don't you think).

So in the spirit of the DPS and John Keating, relate how one of your former(or present) teachers taught you some lesson that was important beyond the classroom.

If you choose a St. Mark's teacher, I'll like to notify him or her of your tribute, if that's OK with you.

All sections should post here; make sure you clearly identify yourself with your initials and section color.

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Sophs--Integrating Quotations

Never, never, DROP quotations into your text without integrating them. Quotations should support or amplify your argument or opinion, and should NOT be used as topic sentences or words to explain your opinion.

This fatal error is called a DROPPED QUOTATION.

You must grammatically integrate (work in) quotations from your sources in standard punctuation and syntax.


How does one do this?

Keep in simple, Sam.

1. Work in impartial quotations


e.g. Adolescents tend to think that tans are attractive and as a result of this are "less likely to use sun protection or to be knowledgeable about skin cancer risks" ("Indoor Tanning").


No comma needed before the quotation if it is worked in without signal phrase like "he said."


The word "less" is lower case (small l), also.


Note: the source citation comes after the quote and before the end period.



2. Quotations introduced with a signal phrase


e.g. Dr. Mark Naylor, a dermatologist at the University of Oklahoma Medical Foundation, said, "There has been an increase in the number of tanning-bed users with skin cancers on parts of their bodies that do not normally get exposed to sunlight" (qtd. in Levine 5).


There is a comma before the quotation because the signal phrase "said" introduces the quotation.


The word "There" is upper case (capitalized).


The source citation uses the phrase "qtd. in" to reflect an "indirect source," meaning that the quotation you've used did not originally come from the source that you used.


3. Set off a full sentence quotation with explanatory information first


Make a declarative statement that explains the importance of the quotation. Then introduce the quotation with a colon. Begin the quotation with an upper case letter.


e.g. Dr. Mark Naylor, a dermatologist at the University of Oklahoma Medical Foundation, notes a new effect of the proliferation of tanning beds: "There has been an increase in the number of tanning-bed users with skin cancers on parts of their bodies that do not normally get exposed to sunlight" (qtd. in Levine 5).



Other hints and reminders


For extended prose quotations of more than four lines


Set off more than four typed lines of prose. Indent one inch or ten spaces from the left margin. Use the normal right margin and do NOT single space. Do not put quotation marks around the quotation. Put the page number after the final punctuation mark.It would be very rare for you to have a quotation of this type in your paper.


Use an ellipsis ( a series of three spaced periods) to indicate left out words


e.g. "The ceremony honored twelve brilliant athletes … visiting the U.S."


Use brackets to indicate words you put in to clarify or make grammatical


e.g. The fruit that is picked and not sold is then treated by “men with hoses [who] squirt kerosene on the oranges" and “dump potatoes in the rivers and place guards along the bank to keep the hungry people from fishing them out."


Use the term “sic” to indicate an error in the original quotation (so that your reader doesn’t think that you’ve made the error)


e.g Joe Taylor said that “he was the bestest [sic] friend he ever had.”

Monday, May 03, 2010

Seniors--Poetry as a Performance (read before lab assignment)

In performance poetry like "Speech Therapy," the type of poetry that jazzes up the genre, the reader is very aware of the "performance" nature of the poem. The poet himself bounces to the rhythm of the spoken word, kick starts and slides into rhymes, shouts metaphors and clashes symbols so that even the poetry novice knows that something is "happening" in the poem.

But what about the performance of a poem like "Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening," the sneakily subtle snowy masterpiece by Robert Frost?

What is the "performance" aspect of that poem?

Read my notes below before you advance to Poetry 180 to read, select, and analyze your own poem.

Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep

Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening—poetry as a performance

1. What the poem means cannot be separated from how it means

2. How it means often involves "performing through difficulties it imposes upon itself"

3. Those difficulties include form (structure), rhyme, meter, symbols, poetic figures, conventions of the genre, etc.

(In Stopping by Woods …. the performance is understated—the story, language is common, not specific or descriptive; the sound is pleasant, almost hypnotic—all creating a tone that invites reader participation)

1st stanza
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.
(highlights of the performance—aaba rhyme "chain-linked" to the next stanza, iambic tetrameter, speaker (familiar with the area), the owner of the woods lives in the village—woods [repeated, too])

2nd stanza
My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

(the performance—bringing in another force [the horse], the setting description of the frozen lake/darkest evening of the year adds a sense of mystery—why is he stopping? Why is it the "darkest evening" of the year?)

3rd stanza
He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.
(the performance—this is a sound stanza—the horse's bells (ake sound) signaling his asking "if there is some mistake" vs. the sweep of easy wind and downy flake—s and w sounds (soft sounds that the narrator notices) and the first introduction of the EEP sound, the sound that will close the poem)

4th stanza
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

((the performance—the use of simple, common, and general woods like "lovely, dark, and deep" invite reader thought, again—what is lovely about the "dark and deep" woods? The four rhyming lines create a lullaby effect with the resonance of the EEP sound—the last line repeats the third—the first time the narrator says this line to indicate a distance to getting home, the repetition implies that he says it to himself because he recognizes some deeper meaning in the words and in this poem)

Frost did not know he was going to write those last lines before he wrote them. It was a happy accident that occurred when he decided he had to eventually end the "chain-link" rhyme, and his performance, in a way that summed up both the message and performance of his poem.

Remember, "what" a poem means cannot be separated from "how" a poem means.

Saturday, May 01, 2010

RED CLASS--Poetry Lab Assignment May 3


RED CLASS ONLY! Complete tonight and post.

Let's see. You struggled to name ten poems that you read prior to this class. Maybe you can read a few today (and increase your knowledge of poetry exponentially) before you decide on one to write about for this assignment.

Check out this list of 180 poems, specially chosen for high school students by Billy Collins (yup, the same one), the former poet laureate of the United States of America.

Read through some of them, find one that you immediately like, then comment on why you like it here at Schoolsville.

As much as you may like the poem's meaning, make sure that you comment on its performance, too.

If you don't understand what I mean by a poem's "performance," then review the most recent blog post on "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening."

This assignment is due before class begins tomorrow: 25 BLOG LINES OR 200 WORDS.

YELLOW CLASS--Poetry Lab Assignment May 3


YELLOW CLASS ONLY! Complete tonight and post.

Let's see. You struggled to name ten poems that you read prior to this class. Maybe you can read a few today (and increase your knowledge of poetry exponentially) before you decide on one to write about for this assignment.

Check out this list of 180 poems, specially chosen for high school students by Billy Collins (yup, the same one), the former poet laureate of the United States of America.

Read through some of them, find one that you immediately like, then comment on why you like it here at Schoolsville.

As much as you may like the poem's meaning, make sure that you comment on its performance, too.

If you don't understand what I mean by a poem's "performance," then review the most recent blog post on "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening."

This assignment is due before class begins tomorrow: 25 BLOG LINES OR 200 WORDS.

PURPLE CLASS-Poetry Lab Assignment May 3


PURPLE CLASS ONLY! Complete tonight and post.

Let's see. You struggled to name ten poems that you read prior to this class. Maybe you can read a few today (and increase your knowledge of poetry exponentially) before you decide on one to write about for this assignment.

Check out this list of 180 poems, specially chosen for high school students by Billy Collins (yup, the same one), the former poet laureate of the United States of America.

Read through some of them, find one that you immediately like, then comment on why you like it here at Schoolsville.

As much as you may like the poem's meaning, make sure that you comment on its performance, too.

If you don't understand what I mean by a poem's "performance," then review the most recent blog post on "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening."

This assignment is due before class begins tomorrow: 25 BLOG LINES OR 200 WORDS.