Monday, May 03, 2010

Seniors--Poetry as a Performance (read before lab assignment)

In performance poetry like "Speech Therapy," the type of poetry that jazzes up the genre, the reader is very aware of the "performance" nature of the poem. The poet himself bounces to the rhythm of the spoken word, kick starts and slides into rhymes, shouts metaphors and clashes symbols so that even the poetry novice knows that something is "happening" in the poem.

But what about the performance of a poem like "Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening," the sneakily subtle snowy masterpiece by Robert Frost?

What is the "performance" aspect of that poem?

Read my notes below before you advance to Poetry 180 to read, select, and analyze your own poem.

Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep

Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening—poetry as a performance

1. What the poem means cannot be separated from how it means

2. How it means often involves "performing through difficulties it imposes upon itself"

3. Those difficulties include form (structure), rhyme, meter, symbols, poetic figures, conventions of the genre, etc.

(In Stopping by Woods …. the performance is understated—the story, language is common, not specific or descriptive; the sound is pleasant, almost hypnotic—all creating a tone that invites reader participation)

1st stanza
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.
(highlights of the performance—aaba rhyme "chain-linked" to the next stanza, iambic tetrameter, speaker (familiar with the area), the owner of the woods lives in the village—woods [repeated, too])

2nd stanza
My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

(the performance—bringing in another force [the horse], the setting description of the frozen lake/darkest evening of the year adds a sense of mystery—why is he stopping? Why is it the "darkest evening" of the year?)

3rd stanza
He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.
(the performance—this is a sound stanza—the horse's bells (ake sound) signaling his asking "if there is some mistake" vs. the sweep of easy wind and downy flake—s and w sounds (soft sounds that the narrator notices) and the first introduction of the EEP sound, the sound that will close the poem)

4th stanza
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

((the performance—the use of simple, common, and general woods like "lovely, dark, and deep" invite reader thought, again—what is lovely about the "dark and deep" woods? The four rhyming lines create a lullaby effect with the resonance of the EEP sound—the last line repeats the third—the first time the narrator says this line to indicate a distance to getting home, the repetition implies that he says it to himself because he recognizes some deeper meaning in the words and in this poem)

Frost did not know he was going to write those last lines before he wrote them. It was a happy accident that occurred when he decided he had to eventually end the "chain-link" rhyme, and his performance, in a way that summed up both the message and performance of his poem.

Remember, "what" a poem means cannot be separated from "how" a poem means.

2 Comments:

At 11:10 AM, Anonymous tc yellow said...

I chose to write about Fat is Not a Fairy Tale, poem number 56, because as soon as I read the title I knew exactly what it was going to be about. The performance of this poem is certainly exaggerated. The whole first stanza is taking fairy tale characters and tweaking their names just the slightest bit. By changing a consonant, or finding a similar sounding word to replace part of the name, the author of this poem changes the description of the character completely. She is thinking of a world where people can get past the super skinny, size 0 society and realizing the beauty in plus size women. The first line of each stanza, "I am thinking of a fairy tale," is stressed because of the fact that these types of stories do not yet exist. The author is dreaming, of a fairy tale whose princess is fat. She is, in a sense, creating her own story, describing the look of her fingers and her breasts. The last stanza stresses the fact that this kind of fairy tale really doesn't exist a story,"Not yet written, not yet born, not yet won." She compares the prototype fairy tale princess, and her idea of a more realistic fairy tale princess. The poem is quite chaotic, not a very relaxing poem. It is very in your face, blunt, and filled with many descriptive terms that may prove offensive to some people. I think the fact that this poem has a very sarcastic tone, makes the poem a lot less harsh and extremely comical for the reader.

 
At 7:32 PM, Anonymous TM Yellow said...

This poem talks about a woman as she is bringing her son to be fingerprinted at the police station. It's kind of weird that this woman would be thinking about herself while her son is going to be arrested. The poem does not rhyme but there is a kind of rhythm to it. The poem also does not have any punctuation accept at the end. It is a very descriptive poem that mainly focuses on what the woman is wearing. It's kind of weird that this woman would be thinking about herself while her son is going to be arrested. You would think that she would have her son on her mind and what is going to happen to him but since she is the one who brought him there then she obviously doesn't care that much about him. She seems to be overly obsessed with herself by the way that she keeps looking at herself and talking about what she is wearing. I guess her son just is not that important to her.

 

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